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days_unfolding) wrote2015-05-30 12:13 pm
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First Writing Exercise
I've done better, but not too bad for a first draft when I haven't written in years.
Rain
Rain, running down my hair
Down my back
Under my skin
Flowing through my veins
Cold, damp, soggy
Circling around
I shiver.
It glosses over
The stubborn stains.
But removes a layer
Of film. I want to see
Everything magnified
Through a raindrop,
Prisms of light
Surrounding me.
I want to melt
Into primary colors
And paint my life
Into flowers.
Rain
Rain, running down my hair
Down my back
Under my skin
Flowing through my veins
Cold, damp, soggy
Circling around
I shiver.
It glosses over
The stubborn stains.
But removes a layer
Of film. I want to see
Everything magnified
Through a raindrop,
Prisms of light
Surrounding me.
I want to melt
Into primary colors
And paint my life
Into flowers.