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Here's some text for the About sidebar for my blog. Comments? Thanks.

Are you an independent traveler? Me too, and I'd love to help you plan the trip of your dreams without stepping on your toes. Are you, as the French say, of a certain age? Me too, and I'd help you plan a trip that will please the most seasoned traveler. For more information, see the About page.

Date: 2016-08-13 05:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] platofish.livejournal.com

The text says you and your client are both independent travelers of a certain age. But, it doesn't suggest why they client might need your services. Perhaps saying 'you have a trip in mind, but don't have the time to plan the details' as one reason why they should consider hiring you.

Date: 2016-08-13 08:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] days-unfolding.livejournal.com
Thanks! Sometimes it's hard to see omissions like that when you write it.

Date: 2016-08-14 02:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gurdonark.livejournal.com
You'd love to have independent travelers of all ages, I suspect.
I also think you'd like to please the novice but non-package customer as well.

I think you want to offer a variety of experiences for a variety of tastes and budgets, without the cookie-cutter experiences built into the usual travel ads.

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